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Once, there was this grand comet floating above Earth. It came by only once in a few years and as coincidence was, two youngsters were brought together one night to watch it. Neither of them had considerably much adoration for science or astronomy. They simply liked watching the stars above. But if one such grotesque event as this particular comet should come along, they promised each other to go see it together. Almost needless to say, the boy was in love with two worlds: her and above. So to say, he loved her and what bound them. Stars. She didn't have such thoughts, it was beyond her imagination, if only
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Let's simply beSurely I see... A wide ocean before you and me Surely I do see... The mystic sky reflected on the seaLet's simply be
And sure, I do feel The sand crushing beneath our feet 'n heel Oh, and do I taste Every spice and flavour in our meal
My eyes turning like some racing wheels My senses sensing everything I see I can't quite describe how it feels But of all the beauty here... You're the only one I see
But of all the beauty here... You're the only one I see
Birds are flying above me To all my logics they seem to agree Yet of a
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UncertaintyWhen one talks about oblivion, about our degeneration, one is not afraid. It's as if our death is written on holy parchment. It is just as median, just as normal, as the snow that slowly melts as summer comes. Just as the leaves that fall and rot away. They become part of the ever-lasting system of recycling. They're made into parts, bricks, segments that all travel floods of life and deliver new life in return. Ghost! Mere ghosts, they are. And nonetheless they exist as they're among everything. And soon we'll become part of them.Uncertainty
Little do we care, however! We have no fear for death. It has become a simple faith for all. It is
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Op een aantal punten zat je dichtbij de werkelijkheid, en soms zat je een beetje fout.
Maar bedankt. Ik denk dat het een verstandige keuze van hem was en heb er nu al wat meer vrede mee. Het was een erg spontane, korte, hevige verliefdheid en ik hoop dat ik het snel weer loskan laten.
je begin was een correcte samenvatting, van wat waarschijnlijk zijn gedachtegang was
''You love someone a lot -> You want to be with him/her all the time -> You can't, because of the distance -> You get sad because you want to hold him/her, but you can't... you need him/her, but you can't -> You feel it's better to let go than to continue having such problems.''
En ja, daar had ik zelf ookal aan gedacht.
Het komt wel goed. Bedankt.
Ik ga nu de journal verwijderen
heel erg bedankt voor je lieve lange reactie
Dude, we've been wondering what's up with you over on NewGrounds. Whirlguy has already released his level collab part by himself, I was planning to submit mine on Nov 1st. All because you haven't made a peep.
Then I remembered you once commented on my DA page... and now I see you been on DA as late as Oct 1st. Too busy to check in with us?
So what's the deal? Are you giving up on the collab or should I still hold on to some hope for it?
PS... Sorry if I sound annoyed but can you really blame me?
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We are all transitional beings, a consequence of the past and a cause for the future.
My NewGrounds profile is here [link]
A proof-reader's nightmare, but a good read nonetheless. I am enjoying reading through your work very much. I may hate you at the end of it though. Chapter Two has no paragraphing!!
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But see it as a challenge! You'll get better, and so will I!
And you're right, a few pages don't have any paragraphing.
Do forgive me, I'll correct if it's too hard too read,
but you might just see it as my own style.
But I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far!
Thanks!
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I love your style, it's great work, I am thoroughly enjoying reading it as I got through it all.
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It's not that important for now,
but I'll note it for next time!
And thank you! That's kind of you;
it's a new sort of style I tried, so
I'm glad it worked out like that!
Good luck with the next pages,
Thanks, mate!
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